Comments on: Feedback request for video class final project http://www.greglinch.com/2009/05/feedback-request-for-video-class-final-project.html Greg Linch on journalism, technology and education. Tue, 07 Feb 2012 08:03:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Greg Linch http://www.greglinch.com/2009/05/feedback-request-for-video-class-final-project.html/comment-page-1#comment-1414 Greg Linch Tue, 05 May 2009 01:43:22 +0000 http://www.greglinch.com/?p=1102#comment-1414 Thanks for the feedback, Joey! Much appreciated. <li>Several clips have been color-corrected. Trying to correct some doesn't work -- that's just the lighting situation.</li> <li>The husband has learning disabilities and his voicebox was injured in a bicycle accident. There's so many things we could explain, but wanted to keep it focused. The point about explaining his learning disabilities may be important if that's a big lingering question, but we figure the HIV question is answered by not being answered -- it's never said that he has it because it doesn't. They use protection.</li> <li>Can do on the establishing house and shelter shots.</li> <li>Wife has had HIV for more than 26 years. Like with many patients, she has no idea how long she has to live.</li> Thanks for the feedback, Joey! Much appreciated.

  • Several clips have been color-corrected. Trying to correct some doesn’t work — that’s just the lighting situation.
  • The husband has learning disabilities and his voicebox was injured in a bicycle accident. There’s so many things we could explain, but wanted to keep it focused. The point about explaining his learning disabilities may be important if that’s a big lingering question, but we figure the HIV question is answered by not being answered — it’s never said that he has it because it doesn’t. They use protection.
  • Can do on the establishing house and shelter shots.
  • Wife has had HIV for more than 26 years. Like with many patients, she has no idea how long she has to live.
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    • Footage should be color-corrected for a consistent feel.
    • Does the husband has mental issues? It seems that way, would be great to have some quote addressing that.
    • Would like to see where they live, more context, the wide shot.
    • Want to see the homeless shelter where they met. Outside establishing shot, followed by a mid and a close cut-away shot would be a prefect 10 seconds.
    • How long does the wife have to live? How does she manage it?
    • Does the husband have AIDS?

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